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Whipped Creme Delight (WARNING: Sexual Content)

Dim the lights
Turn them low
It's time for the show

Heated passion
Ignites the spark
Drinking the salt
From your flame

Shaking the can
Spread it on
Licking sweetness
From my fingertips

Bottom to top
Can't get enough
Flicking the tip
With my tounge

Hip to hip
Thrust to push
Take a ride
In reverse

Gentle moans
Silent groans
A whipped topping end
— hardcorechick28, Nov 17, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

Isn’t sex just great fun!

Isn't sex just great fun! All we need is a Maraschino cherry on top. ;-) ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

Great stuff!

Cherries were made to be eaten! Whipped cream to be licked and savored, and then the ice cream melting in your throat! Ohhhh, I gotta go get something to wash this down, ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 6 months ago

did you.....

find something to drink??? Cool off a little??? LOL!!!! Glad you liked it....more to come
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

Great!

I remember doing this a few times... were you peeking? LOL!
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Norty lol

Ok how many of our windows have you been peeking ...ha ha (hugz) loved this saucy poem ... sorry I missed it till now bigggg smile lol love Jayne x x
DloganB

DloganB

16 years 4 months ago

OOOO LA LA

Well you know what I am going to say hehe but yeah very arousing deffinitly makes your mind start to think of other places and other things