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First Date Delight (Changes and Tweaks With The Help of Geezer)
Through the aisles
Menu in mind
Hoping to find meat
Of the freshest kind
DeMona watches him intently
Intriqued by his deadly essence
Turned on by his deadly presence
That draws her closer to the man within
From frozen food
To check-out line
DeMona stalks her prey
Wanting him to be proud of her
She won’t let this one get away
Killer comes out a bit too late
The deed is already done
The disappointment fades from his eyes
With the promise of more to come
The feast all stashed in the trunk
The recipies to discuss
Conversation and toothsome cooking
At the Killer’s bunk
Back at the lair
They cut her up with flair
Singing as they worked
“Old Time Rock and Roll”
Soothes even a serial soul
Cracked ribs with coagulated gravy
Music plays softly, and low
The perfect dinner
For cannibalistic sinners
Lit by candle-glow
DeMona stares silently
As Killer puts his arm around her waist
He says the most romantic things
” It’s your lips I want to taste”
And now it’s face to face
And lip to lip
DeMona thinks it’s going well
Will they join at the hip?
Only time will tell
Critiques
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Yes!
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
awesome....
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
I'm glad...
hardcorechick28
16 years 5 months ago
i am
Breakinglogic
16 years 5 months ago
I love this type of humor :)
hardcorechick28
16 years 5 months ago
so glad
Candlewitch
16 years 5 months ago
Hello
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
Hello too...