Breakinglogic

Member since April 29, 2009

Member for 17 years, 1 month

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falling stars

Posted Oct 5, 2021 · 8 lines · 5 critiques

Another shooting star

I refrained from wishing,

having watched it

disappear

Breakinglogic’s timeline

April 2024
28 Sun

Anniversary
15 years of membership
July 2023
15 Sat

Received a critique
on Soon! from @Ruby Lord
"It's as if you're painting the transition from season to season and it was flawless. Your imagery is vivid and the rhyming structure consistent. Use of aliteration is great: "and forest fawns will plot with friends "not…"
February 2022
03 Thu

Received a critique
on falling stars from @Entend2u
"This poem gives me a funny feeling because it is at once descriptive of a split second but then again the description of eternity - history is a pattern of timeless moments (Eliot) - All things must pass (Harrison). Will"
November 2021
21 Sun

Received a critique
on falling stars from @Catherine DeGear
"It's simple and to the point. Short poems are not easy (at least not for me) so I admire anyone who can do with seeming ease. Catherine"
October 2021
05 Tue

Posted a poem
falling stars
" "
Open thread 8 lines
February 2021
09 Tue

Posted a poem
Earthquake redacted
"An earthquake shaking"
Open thread 11 lines
July 2020
29 Wed

Posted a poem
Soon!
"Beneath the leaves of autumn's bed,"
Open thread 12 lines
April 2019
28 Sun

Anniversary
10 years of membership
April 2014
28 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2010
02 Wed

Most-discussed work
Between the walls encumbered

29 critiques to date.
April 2010
28 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2009
15 Tue

Highest posting month
December 2009 — 6 poems
April 2009
29 Wed

First critique offered
on "SERAGLIO --revised" by @Geremia
29 Wed

First publication
Masks
28 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.