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Serial Love

So dark and handsome
This mysterious stranger
Peaked her interest
With his cannibalistic charm
One date, what could be the harm?

She could smell his fear
His inexperience
Heightened her senses
Soothing the beast
Raging within

A bouquet of roses, she thought not
The bag of blood
He brought
Hit the spot

Feeding off the fingers
Of his latest victim
Seductively, licking her lips
In her mind, this night
Was going to be a trip

After dinner, a tour
Of his gruesome store
Knives, saws and more
Instinct from the start
He was a man after her own heart
A perfect match
For this vampire whore

Whipped cream and cherries
Upon sweetened limbs
Make for the perfect dessert
A quiet dance, leading to a
Bloody good night kiss
What will become of this





— hardcorechick28, Nov 23, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 6 months ago

Killer is estatic!

Killer was babbling on so enthusiastic I could hardly understand him. The thoughts and images just came so fast, they almost knocked me down! I think he really likes her! He wants to be left alone in the kitchen tonight so he can try a new recipe. I think he is planning another date soon. ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 6 months ago

DeMona.....

is excited as well, been talking about Killer all night/morning. I cant get her to shut up!!!! Cant wait for his next creation...hoping for another date soon :)
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Heya Chick lol

Demona and Killer are going to get smutty lol wooot I cannot wait hahaha ... loved this one ... felt like it tied well with Gees ... I think you guys maybe onto something ;) there are a two typos bouquet,and till in the last line ... loved it hun :) love and hugs Jayne x x x
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hardcorechick28

16 years 6 months ago

DeMona and Killer.......

oh the possibilities and potential that relationship has!!! LOL!!! Sorry about the typos....it was gettin late for me and I was tired. They are really fun to write about. Glad you liked it...more to come...