karen

Member since November 12, 2010

Member for 15 years, 6 months

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Asleep and Unaware

Posted Apr 18, 2010 · 8 lines · 1 critiques

To sleep
is to be at peace
with Your mind closed
reality is shut out
it is only your dreams
that you will see
and when you awake
do you come back into reality

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15 years of membership
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November 2010
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Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
May 2010
05 Wed

Received a critique
on Asleep and Unaware from @loved
"....not sound unless its like death and then there is no question of dreams its all over do think it all over"
April 2010
18 Sun

Posted a poem
Asleep and Unaware
"To sleep"
Open thread 8 lines
18 Sun

Critiqued
"FLOWER FROZEN" by @sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
"your poem is different and it's nice to see how we think when we write"
17 Sat

Received a critique
on Devil's Friends from @sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
"To start I must say this is a subject close to my heart. The words placed are not to run from a toung yet in my mind they are keeping my eyes to the screen. Some people are to be of the mindset that all soldiers are ter…"
March 2010
30 Tue

Received a critique
on My Hero from @lyz
"Yes, the horror of war has its affect on all and I also feel for your loss. This is a lovely write. Lyz. XX"
30 Tue

Received a critique
on My Hero from @magics02
"So sad for your loss and I share this one with you. Great little write. Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short."
30 Tue

Posted a poem
My Hero
"A soldier you was"
Open thread 12 lines
26 Fri

Received a critique
on Sawn and Gone from @weirdelf
"A small crit, in the last line whilst nature lives in harmony and peace whilst nature lived in harmony and peace [the past tense may add impact] A bigger one. The poem lacks poetic qualities, again for impact perhaps us…"
26 Fri

Posted a poem
Sawn and Gone
"            "
Open thread 22 lines
26 Fri

Received a critique
on Reality of Life from @weirdelf
"The title sucks. "The Reality of life" implies so much more than what you actually say. Cheers, Jess, “The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue.” Emma Goldman"
10 Wed

Posted a poem
Reality of Life
"Life"
Open thread 23 lines
09 Tue

Posted a poem
Day Come Night
"The day light fades away"
Open thread 22 lines
02 Tue

Received a critique
on The End is in Sight from @mark
"Matter of fact writing, Karen. I think there is more room for poetry and I would like more. I hope you continue with - the end is in sight :) Truy, Mark "I do not walk the earth and eat out of dumpsters, I'm not a bum…"
February 2010
26 Fri

Received a critique
on Devil's Friends from @yenti
"This piece of writing is nearly a poetic way of seeing the horror of terrorists, so it has been said, now let them answer to their God, I have been in areas where there have been people fighting for their own rights and…"
25 Thu

Posted a poem
The End is in Sight
"red alert"
Open thread 17 lines
04 Thu

Posted a poem
Death from Poison
"In the corner of a derilict building"
Open thread 9 lines
01 Mon

Posted a poem
Devil's Friends
"Terroist's"
Open thread 19 lines
January 2010
26 Tue

Posted a poem
moving force
"a busy town"
Open thread 21 lines
19 Tue

Posted a poem
homeless drunk
"sleeping besides an old wall"
Open thread 19 lines
November 2009
26 Thu

Posted a poem
Oh Christmas
" "
Open thread 21 lines
October 2009
30 Fri

Posted a poem
A Child’s Christmas Eve
"Oh I’m so excited"
Open thread 29 lines
June 2009
03 Wed

Critiqued
"Night Bridge" by @Bert Lamrick
"i liked your poem"
April 2009
06 Mon

Critiqued
"strength in sickness " by @maryann
"A beutiful piece of work"
April 2008
16 Wed

Critiqued
"Feel The Real" by @lovealone
"i liked it"
16 Wed

First critique offered
on "Feel The Real" by @lovealone
March 2008
24 Mon

First publication
Fantasy