Fantasy

Welcome to the site. I am a huge fantasy fan and these lines really sum up why:- Fantasy takes you into another world A world where nobody can come in Here you can do what you want when you want It’s a place where you can retreat and be at peace Excellent writing - I look forward to seeing more of your work :-) Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

and not only because I am a huge fan of imagination. I'm also a structure geek so i am going to suggest a restructure of your poem in a conversational format that works for me. Please do not take this as a "do it this way" but rather as a "Here's an idea, do you think you might be able to use it?' So, putting on my pointy hat of Presumption, this is how I would restructure your poem: ---------- Fantasy What a wonderful magical word for it allows to escape from the realms of reality Fantasy takes you into another world A world where nobody can come in Here you can do what you want when you want It’s a place where you can retreat and be at peace Everybody has a fantasy it’s what we live for ------------------ I'd be interested in your views. Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)