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Mar 09, 2010
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Day Come Night
The day light fades away
as the sun goes down
appearing before us
is the coming of night
as dusk sets in
all around
buildings and objects
begin to change
as they turn
into black silhouettes of the night
their shadows
are of all peculiar shapes
seem to stretch across the ground
high above , in the dark sky
stars can be seen
twinkling into the night
There is a full moon, that brightly glows
Sharing it’s light for all too see
the sky
is beautifully lit up
whilst the ground is darkened
with the night
— karen, Mar 09, 2010
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