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Oct 27, 2009
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My Poor Child
Oh my poor child
you have just collapsed to the floor
weakened by malnutrition
you don’t have any more strength
your small bones
are now like twigs
fragile and thin
as you lay on the floor
you call out to me
your voice is only a whisper
but I can hear you
I quickly come and help you
and as I bend down
I look into your eyes
and what I see
is a child
who no longer cries
but instead just stares
my poor child
I want to help you
but I can’t
i have nothing to give
I have no food
I have no medicine
all I can do
is comfort you
as I put my arms around you
my eyes begin to cry
those tears that fall
are tears of heartache and anguish
for as a mother I am heartbroken
because I can do nothing for my child
— karen, Oct 27, 2009
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Critiques
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Sad and sorrowful, but well-written!