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A Wonderful Proposal
It was early in the morning
When I was
suddenly woken up, with the sound of a loud knock
still feeling half asleep
I stumbled out of bed as I got up to answer the door
when I opened it
I got a surprise
Because, there you were
standing, with your hands held in the air
holding a child’s bucket and spade
you winked at me with a smile
and said
guess where we are going
I shrieked in delight and shouted the beach
you shook your head and said no
and then you handed me the bucket and spade
and asked me to follow you into the garden
as I followed you, you pointed to a place
where you ask me if I could dig it up
although I was puzzled by what was going on
I still carried out what you had asked me to do
and so I begun to dig
and as I removed the soil
I discovered a small box,
I picked it up and opened it
Inside, laid a beautiful diamond ring
I went very quiet
,for I was lost for words
gently, you placed your hand on my face and kissed my lips
and then you took my hand and ask me if I would marry you
tears of joy ran down my cheeks
as I said yes
what a wonderful way to propose
Critiques
Geezer
16 years 10 months ago
Wonderful Proposal