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Walking by the river
Baby
remember how we got together
it was a day that neither of us will never forget
i was walking my dog by the river
when i first saw you
there you was
standing on the bank of the river
fishing with your rod
when my silly dog suddenly decides
he wants to chase the ducks
unfortunately
you got in the way of his path
and knocked you into the water
i immediately came running to your rescue
and apologised for what happened
but the way you looked at me was so funny
because you was furious at what had just happened
i burst out laughing and could'nt stop
but i made it up to you
i took you back to my place
where i washed your clothes and cooked you a nice hot meal
we sat talking for hours until you went home
we arranged to meet again
and you insisted that we met by the river
i said o.k
we met the next day and i remember coming up to you with a big smile
but much to my horror
you pushed me in the water
this time the tables were turned as you now stood there laughing
what could i say
i was speechless
you looked at me and said now i have my justice
ever since then we have been together
love meets at the strangest places
Critiques
paparazii
17 years ago
walking by the river