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Jan 19, 2010
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homeless drunk
sleeping besides an old wall
is a drunken homeless man
he lays there
with his dirty blankets
wrapped around him
in one hand
he is holding
a half empty bottle of vodka
his pain
is of
sadness and loneliness
he feels
that he is isolated from society
and because of this
he turns to alcohol
who soon bcomes his friend
this friend is the wrong friend
but he knows
that this friend is always there for him
is a drunken homeless man
he lays there
with his dirty blankets
wrapped around him
in one hand
he is holding
a half empty bottle of vodka
his pain
is of
sadness and loneliness
he feels
that he is isolated from society
and because of this
he turns to alcohol
who soon bcomes his friend
this friend is the wrong friend
but he knows
that this friend is always there for him
— karen, Jan 19, 2010
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