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FLOWER FROZEN

A flower in need
the flower indeed
knows only to seed.

Abuse is attribute
conflection of the day.

Open as the eye
closed can be the mind
playing in lost time.

Easy to say
yet hard to comply
reason of time.

Standing alone is life
thinking of anothers plight
alive yet to ponder sight.

I see yet a question
yes a direction of reflection.

Never to ask why
she will saunder by.




                                                                                                                                                Steven A. Kacer


















































































































































 

— sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk, Nov 26, 2009

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W.C.Wampler

16 years 6 months ago

Flower Frozen poem

S.A.K., Your work is always interesting to me. Your words are minimal, yet quite engaging. I think you are a man with a wide scope of experience. So I think also, that there is a great deal written in between your lines as well. wcw
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 6 months ago

Between the lines

W.C. I laugh and smile I frown and complain I speak what I think and well keep a piece of myself just to me. I must say of what I think your picture holds to my gray. Like this, Howdy nice to meet you my name is W.C. don't worry about the 45 I am about to place my right hand on as the 3-80 in my left will surfice. So you are new to the street I live on dang just a second hold this thanks my hand was getting a little tired as the pin to that gernade I left in my other pants. Don't worry as I will be back yet at this time I'm late I need to pick up my daughter from her date. I'm never late by the way if you have some duct tape you can place it to the lever just keep it tight. Place it in my mail box I will get it when the papper comes no worries the mail main is a friend of mine. Got to go nice to meet you and have a fine day. Steven A. Kacer
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Lovely

Sakkkkkkkkkkkkk This one is so wonderful..the words..the feelings..reflect in my mind. Thank you for sharing. Until later my friend keep writing Magics02
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 1 month ago

Relaxing

Magic. I wonder if you have a place in your gray that is to say you are ok. In my mind you are better than most yet I must excuse myself. I find that when life is to a comfort zone. I tend to lack on the way of words that should be placed. I guess I'm just me. So to reflect upon the day I write you a frind a person I love a poem of a flower. FLOWER Look under your feet It's me It's me. O well it matters not Void of simple thoughts. It's me It's me a flower You that gave me a shower. Thanks for the red mud It stops the blood. Now you cry to earth Your tears offer my birth. Steven A. Kacer
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Thank you

Oh Sak that is so special of you to write me this poem. What a nice way to start my day. Peace to you this day and we will chat tonight. Thank you so much. Love, Magics02
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Steven

Third last line you have an extra r in directions ... but can I say ? this is wonderful this one has a different feel from all your other poetry ... I dont know what it is I cannot put my finger on it ... but simply Steven I loved it ... and the only fault I could see was your extra rrrrr lol .... well done !! five for stepping out of your confort zone . bravo love and hugs Jayne x x
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 6 months ago

The extra R.

I smile and yet I wonder why I love the written word that passes by the gray that I keep. Steven A. Kacer
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 5 months ago

A letter to many

Seren. Thanks for the time spent. As you can see the extra R is now not to be. Have a fine day. Steven A. Kacer
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Steven

Nicely done with this one ... I came back for another read and really is a big step away from your other writes ...and I noticed your RRR has gone lol take care Love and hugs Jayne x x
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

Yes, I appreciate that this is

"in sight of the cross hair to the left side of my mind", as Jayne said a change of direction for you which I do appreciate. conflection confliction? saunder saunter Cheers, Jess, whose nature is irrepressible
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 5 months ago

The cross hair

Wirdelf. Strange yet true as I see the dominant eye is my left yet I write with my right. Perhaps the conflection of confliction in my gray. The cross hair my friend must be imprented in my brain as I see it clear even if looking at a smile. No matter as the mouse is not in the house. I laugh at myself as to the truth of the day. The mouse is in the house as where else could he survive. Good luck on the morrow of life. Do me a favor and don't move don't even twitch. Did you not hear the click when you took that last step. No worries just relaxe as I have done this a few times in the past. I understand I look like a fool with a small tool digging at the dirt. Ok do me a favor and step backwords to the picture of my feet when you are clear then I will finish this job and if I'm not at role call then eat what was placed for me. Steven A. Kacer
Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

16 years 5 months ago

Just like in chat, you have

Just like in chat, you have a way with words and ideas. As I look at you words I find they do well to test one's lateral mind. I have to say, your works well done, Stephen A with a K for fun Peace and cheers logic
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 5 months ago

A twix to a mix

Logic. I don't know why yet my name is important to me. My father said let him be called Steven not Stephen. Alan not Allen. Kacer well not Kaser as so many seem to think. I know not why the wolf without eyes. The ghost of a dead man as well as a ship from the sky spent time with me yet they did and what the heck I'm just me a redneck named Steven A. Steven A. Kacer
Breakinglogic

Breakinglogic

16 years 5 months ago

Steven, right, how

Steven, right, how misconstrude I made your name, I feel quite rude. Had I thought to look again, I would have spelled it right my friend, but it's just like me to make such ruck, my friend, Steven A with a K for luck.
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 5 months ago

No worries

Logic. No matter as I will always be just me my friend come the end of the day. Thanks for the reply and I will see you if even to a glance from the flip side of life. Steven A. Kacer
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 5 months ago

The Day

Jayne, It is now almost Christmas in my neck of the woods. Thanks for the kind words placed to my poetry. Have a fine day and I hope all is well. Your friend. Steven A. Kacer
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orgami

16 years 5 months ago

five

point your flow is like an electric calm the words weaving like a village at ease the fires the voices the animals smoke mixing with the stars that are unwinding into the deep like river nets and lanterns of flame laughter glinting like fish smiles
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 5 months ago

A picture placed

Orgami. I my friend hold a view of a smile to a fish. As you know I love the lady the sea. Yet I smile when her children are to dance. As a school of sardines are to play in my gray of past. They flew like they had wings jumping and running forward and back yet agian. They offered a smile from my gray that I will keep to place a smile to in my grave. Then as you say as your thought is well to the picture you place to me. I see a soldier that is to drown in hypocracry as he holds his cover so tight that his hands are to bleed. I look to the bird the dog the cat with a stripe yes even the skunk I hold love. Yet as you seem to understand me as even the bum on the street holds a place to me. Your picture places a awe to me as now you no longer look like a redneck my friend. you place a picture of much deeper thought. I will say what I think. Not to be rude just what I see in a picture of your eyes I find a soldier yes a hunter for sure a man of past and a person of truth. Thinking at this moment in time my mind at ease. The question I would ask you would simply be to tell why the wolf without eyes came on that day to take me away? I wonder as I ask that why did the Mexican wolf that no man could get close to sit by me and eat from my hand. I guess I will not know the reason why as so many things have came to my mind. Well if you can Explain to me the reason for the wolves my friend if not then by chance this dog is barking up the wrong tree. Steven A. Kacer
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

nice

sakkkkkkkkkkkkk your a free man and a wonderful man are you. love magics02
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 5 months ago

Free

Magic. In my mind no person that lives to this day is free. Not the fool nore the person of welth. We are just pawns in a game. What brings a smile to my face is the simple fact that we can choose the road we are to take and the actions we are to make. So on reflection of my words we are free to a extent. Steven A. Kacer
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 1 month ago

Karens truth

With age comes wisdome. What the hell I'm getting older as we speak. You my friend are well to words short and sweet.
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

still love this one and where have you been dear friend, Miss chatting with you in neocafe. You take care and write me sometime. Miss you flower Love and Hugs to you Mona xoxoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 1 month ago

Just a reply

Mona, I walk each day usually before the sun is to awake. Yet this day I slept in and when I walked the dog and by chance what did I find. Yes a flower had made her way small she is yet so fine to the minds eye. She I think road the wind on the back of a bull thorn. Yet so fine so small so sweet her face is of a small daisey. Holding a yellow so bright a white so clean. I guess in my mind that is to say. God made flowers and men make machines. Laughing at my mind as I cannot place hand to her as she holds so little time in life. With that I will say have a fine Sunday. Your friend in words spoken and in words lost to the wind. Steven A. Kacer
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

16 years 1 month ago

Reflection on the day

W.C. I have a question. Yes pehaps a reflection of time spent. If I were to start the game in my gray I know well perhaps not another day to play. Yet closer and closer to the edge my life brings me in. I laugh and cry I say what the hell is to my demise. I ask yet no answer from my God as my God has left me to swing in the wind. So I ask of you to be yourself as trust is somthing I kept alive. Not fearing the loss of my life yet knowing the gate will not open for me. I hope not to mess with your mind. Yet from time to time I offer only this good luck and Gods speed to the next. S.A.KKK
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

15 years 11 months ago

Frozen flower

Sakkkkkkkkkk You intrigue me so. The seeda of the flower are we To fall where the shifting winds blowa Open eyes so closed do not see the mind too wander be So easy to be but hard to comply for most I fear Standing alone in life am I thinking of others do I If I can help in any way give what I can whatever may I always question the direction the reflection of he when will he walk again my way? Waitng In anticipation Electric Blue
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

15 years 11 months ago

Electric is the blue

My fine poet of truth. I have no answer yet I ponder the thought placed. I say only this. I never thought of the wolf without eyes untill he came for me. He lost the battle as there was three that shot so many times to darkness. Yet he just kept comming. We must have placed pain to his life. Yet never even a yelp was heard. Funny yet not as we became a circle of three when we thought our only choice was to walk away. In the dark we walked fifteen miles never to tire and made our way to the light of the day. Perhaps you have a better clue to what it was and why it came for us. Now to the wolf from Mexico. I don't know why yet I stoped at a store to purchase a few things and watched as there were many dogs as to a pack. one was the only leader so what the heck I asked. The store owner said to my question as I asked is that a wolf as he looks like one I have seen in the past. Yes he came here about four years ago. And please she stated don't get near him as no person has ever been able to coax him. I purchased milk and bred and the the largest bag of dog food I have seen in a store. I asked her if I bought this dog food would you be willing to make sure that dog is feed. I gave her the price of the food and fifty bucks and said I will be back so please remember why I sprnt the money and do what you promissed you would do. Before I left the store I bought a pack of animal cookies and sat in the dirt outside the wolf after about a hour or two walked to me and sat down on the ground. He would not take a cookie in fact he growled at me yet I just talked to him. He finaly came close and ate from my hand. I got up and said my friend you should be feed each day . Just be smart and don't bite the shopkeeper. I got up walked to the truck and never wen't back agian. I laugh at myself as the truth is what I speak. My friends don't have a clue to things like I just explained. As to my lady of the dark. This is a story of truth and just the start of what has been placed to my plat of life. Sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk Steven A. Kacer.