sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Member since September 8, 2008

Member for 17 years, 8 months

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CRAVING LOVE

Posted Jul 1, 2010 · 15 lines · 12 critiques

Love deprived unsensitized.

Thoughts of demise
loving a surprise
remembering the disguise.

Forgetting the sunrise
wishing to compromise.

Once upon a time
knowing the reason why
killing to stay alive.

Looking to flowers
having no power.

The gate never to open
hell just offered a token
craving love is simply unspoken.

sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk’s timeline

September 2023
07 Thu

Anniversary
15 years of membership
September 2018
07 Fri

Anniversary
10 years of membership
September 2013
07 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
July 2010
18 Sun

Received a critique
on CRAVING LOVE from @Electric Blue
"Sakkkkkk Are you a White Knight? I give my Dark Knight all I can give and more beyond but in the shadows he feels safe Electric Blue"
14 Wed

Received a critique
on CRAVING LOVE from @Seren
"I am late late late for a this very important date ... but I got here I just found it ... bravo my friend I loved it ... the 'ise' rhymes bothered me a little like Jess but with a reread they dont sound so Jarring I wil…"
13 Tue

Received a critique
on FLOWER FROZEN from @Electric Blue
"Sakkkkkkkkkk You intrigue me so. The seeda of the flower are we To fall where the shifting winds blowa Open eyes so closed do not see the mind too wander be So easy to be but hard to comply for most I fear Standing alon…"
01 Thu

Posted a poem
CRAVING LOVE
"Love deprived unsensitized."
Open thread 15 lines
June 2010
06 Sun

Posted a poem
SQUARE BOX
"Please step in."
Open thread 10 lines
May 2010
03 Mon

Posted a poem
MAGIC
"Awe the sun.  Thanking God I will watch her run.  Placing my knees to ground yes without a sound.  my eyes now wide open.  Asking myself is it true what I see.  Magic is that you or is my mind playing tricks on me.  Wondering two things at the same time.  Why did you come? And what would you ask of me.  Placed without the loose of time only yes it is I and I came to be at your side.  The statment was only this.  You pack heavy are you looking for blood?  I reply as to say yes I go to the killing field alone come the morrow of the day next.  I need my tools of death.  Asking do you not have your soul or did by chance you were to sell your mind to a devil?  A smile I offer and by chance a misunderstood comment.  My weapons my lady bring me comfort.  So no I will not leave them to rust.  Walking to the open door.  Telling only myself excuse me as my hands are full and my pack be it heavy.  Don't go I hear to my minds eye.  Don't follow me as I send a tear to my lips.  After a five mile hike I turn back .  When home is to be I find the room empty.  I wonder was Magic actually here or just my mind playing tricks to my gray.  Placing my weapons to thier rightfull place asking myself why.  When in the corner of my mind Magic comes alive.  Yelling and crying I ask myself why did you come as now I hold no need to bleed.  I lay myself to slumber and with a message I send a thanks to Magic for saving me.  With a fine day to offer and a Gods speed to the next. "
Open thread 1 lines
November 2009
26 Thu

Most-discussed work
FLOWER FROZEN

29 critiques to date.
September 2009
07 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
November 2008
29 Sat

First publication
SOLACE OF SOUL
September 2008
08 Mon

First critique offered
on "The Desolate Heart" by @Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
07 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 83 days later.