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Jul 01, 2010
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CRAVING LOVE
Love deprived unsensitized.
Thoughts of demise
loving a surprise
remembering the disguise.
Forgetting the sunrise
wishing to compromise.
Once upon a time
knowing the reason why
killing to stay alive.
Looking to flowers
having no power.
The gate never to open
hell just offered a token
craving love is simply unspoken.
— sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk, Jul 01, 2010
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greeneyes
16 years ago
Beautiful!
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
16 years ago
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Professor Purple
16 years ago
I'm not sure I got it
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
16 years ago
Professor Purple
Mark
16 years ago
The last line says it all
weirdelf
16 years ago
as mark says, that last line is bloody brilliant!
Electric Blue
16 years ago
Craving Love
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
16 years ago
Just you
Electric Blue
16 years ago
Craving Love
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
16 years ago
Electric Blue
Electric Blue
16 years ago
Craving Love
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Steven
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