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A Blinding View



My mind is open

but  my eyes are closed

born blind

I see only darkness

It is this darkness

that makes me live behind a   curtain

a curtain that  is always closed

 I want so much

to be able look at this world

to see

 what it really is

I wish that I could look at all the beautiful things

Instead of having to be told of what they are

I would like to be able to look and tell you what some thing is

without having to always feel and touch it

I am saddened with the thought

 that I  live in reality and yet I cannot see it

I ‘m tired of always trying to imagine it

May be one day this curtain will be drawn

and my dream of vision will be fulfilled

 


— karen, Jul 19, 2009

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yenti

yenti

16 years 11 months ago

Karen

Am not sure what to say, as this poem would indicate that you cannot or have never seen and I just would like to know if this is so, or that it is a piece that is your idea of being blind, so I await your reply, Yours Ian.T
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lyz

16 years 11 months ago

Beautiful

I liked reading this.Soul writing, searching, makes one think about emotions we all portray at sometime. Worded Beautiful. Lyz.

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