Sinthya

Member since May 15, 2010

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The Call

Posted Jul 16, 2010 · 17 lines · 2 critiques

Phone rings.
I say hello.
The voice on the other line is unknown.
Who is this person.
how does he know me.
I shake.
Tears roll down my face.
The thought of losing you hurts.
My mind says to ask questions,
But I can not speak.
The voice tells me something.
I only hear Car accident and Hospital.
Tears flood my eyes,
I hang up.
How could this be happening.
Not you ,
Not now.

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15 years of membership
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10 years of membership
May 2015
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5 years of membership
May 2011
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One year of membership
July 2010
17 Sat

Received a critique
on The Call from @weirdelf
"my only suggestion is to add a little something after the third line to capture the moment of fear, uncertainty, perhaps irritation of what a strangers voice on the phone can be a prelude to. Cheers, Jess, Praise helps…"
16 Fri

Posted a poem
The Call
"Phone rings."
Open thread 17 lines
15 Thu

Received a critique
on The View from @Geezer
"I like this alot, and agree with the comments above. I too, hope that you will stick around, and give us more. Sometimes even a nineteen year old, can bring insight to us all. ~ Geezer"
15 Thu

Received a critique
on The View from @Roscoe Lane
"view our lives, hopefully happy but sadly not always. Hope you view remains, and your poetry keeps on coming to Neopoet. Regards Roscoe..."
15 Thu

Received a critique
on The View from @weirdelf
"the only thing I can add is that that last line, in your special way, fixes the poem as something way beyond what it seems. You are truly gifted and a poet to be watched for. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,"
14 Wed

Received a critique
on The View from @Marie-I-Be
"Hi. I've read a couple of yours now. I think you have undeniable talent. So far I see tender insight and precious directness. Your way of writing touches chords. This is warm and moving. I'm recalling a few Views of my…"
14 Wed

Posted a poem
The View
"Sun shinning."
Open thread 18 lines
14 Wed

Received a critique
on Your thought from @weirdelf
"Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,"
06 Tue

Received a critique
on A Poem For You from @Geezer
"to compare to the connecting of two people. Even if it isn't a romantic liasion. Just the thought that there is someone who connects with the thoughts and emotions I have, makes this world a little friendlier. Keep writ…"
06 Tue

Received a critique
on Your thought from @Geezer
"the ones no one else seems to care about, are often the most interesting ones. We all have them, but rarely put them into voice, or write them down. A very introspective poem. ~ Geezer P.S. Thanks for wanting to be my b…"
06 Tue

Posted a poem
Your thought
" I look at your Picture."
Open thread 10 lines
03 Sat

Posted a poem
A Poem For You
"For the first time in a long time,"
Open thread 16 lines
02 Fri

Critiqued
"One Love" by @Rich-The-Poet
"the girl who is with you is so lucky"
02 Fri

Critiqued
"The Breath of Me" by @Rich-The-Poet
"wow this is even more beautiful i hope to meet a guy who can write poems like this."
02 Fri

Critiqued
"Let Us Pray" by @Rich-The-Poet
"this is so beautiful. i love the flow."
02 Fri

Posted a poem
When you walked in
"When you walked in,"
Open thread 18 lines
June 2010
29 Tue

Critiqued
"Purgatory" by @Hooded Stranger
"Dan, this is great you need to write more. I crave more things like this tio read when im bord."
23 Wed

Posted a poem
The Time
"Many years i thought "
Open thread 9 lines
09 Wed

Critiqued
"The Perfect Storm" by @Rett
"This is so miving with the mood i have been in your work really expresses the way i feel."
09 Wed

Posted a poem
your chance
"Not in a million years"
Open thread 18 lines
09 Wed

Critiqued
"Overheard From Outside A Damsel's Gazeebo" by @brittle light
"this is wounderful"
09 Wed

Critiqued
"SQUARE BOX" by @sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
"this is so beautiful. your writting is amazing."
06 Sun

Posted a poem
Song of myself
"19 years old."
Open thread 22 lines
05 Sat

Critiqued
"Bummer" by @brittle light
"this is deep very deep"
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Love or Lust
"i look at you"
Open thread 17 lines
May 2010
24 Mon

Posted a poem
You laugh
"You think you are a threat."
Open thread 12 lines
19 Wed

Posted a poem
day dream
"When i think back i see not me,"
Open thread 25 lines
18 Tue

Posted a poem
taking control
"You left me speechless,"
Open thread 21 lines
16 Sun

First critique offered
on "Why is it wrong?" by @Alice Ember
15 Sat

Highest posting month
May 2010 — 5 poems
14 Fri

First publication
time to fight
14 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

I write about my life and the things I have been through. I live in Upstate New York. I'm 28 with two kids who are my world. I'm pretty open so don't be afraid to ask me anything.

Location: New York

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I cant really say i have a favorite!

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on The Call from @weirdelf

on The View from @Geezer

on The View from @Roscoe Lane

on The View from @weirdelf

on The View from @Marie-I-Be

on Your thought from @weirdelf

on A Poem For You from @Geezer

on Your thought from @Geezer

"One Love" by @Rich-The-Poet

"The Breath of Me" by @Rich-The-Poet

"Let Us Pray" by @Rich-The-Poet

"Purgatory" by @Hooded Stranger

"The Perfect Storm" by @Rett

"Overheard From Outside A Damsel's Gazeebo" by @brittle light

"SQUARE BOX" by @sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

"Bummer" by @brittle light

on "Why is it wrong?" by @Alice Ember

May 2010 — 5 poems

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