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The Breath of Me

 

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I see my picture mirrored in your eyes when I look at you

pure beauty giving me hope

holding me down as my days pass

loving me with a strength that’s beyond thought

you give me a love like,the unknown desires

A lit fire in my heart

burns a craving for another moment

another day of a beating song that

plays as frequent as a radio station

playing a new hit

so I recite words that my sincerity writes

from the emotions  that my heart gives

wow

I see my scriptures of devotion

writing new thoughts as seconds pass

wanting so much to

not just to tell you, but remind you that

I love you so much

my dearest love

I feel I am complete when I hold you

I feel whole when I kiss you,and

I feel invincible when I am beside you

for you are

THE BREATH OF ME
 

— Rich-The-Poet, Jun 18, 2010

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sammysew

15 years 11 months ago

wow!!! pure emotion and what

wow!!! pure emotion and what a way to say I love you! I love the title from just that you hope for a special read and I was not disappointed. Thank you. Sammy x
Sinthya

Sinthya

15 years 11 months ago

Wow

wow this is even more beautiful i hope to meet a guy who can write poems like this. <3 Sinthya <3 "Live life each day to the fullest'. 'You never know when it will end."