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Jun 18, 2010
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The Breath of Me
I see my picture mirrored in your eyes when I look at you
pure beauty giving me hope
holding me down as my days pass
loving me with a strength that’s beyond thought
you give me a love like,the unknown desires
A lit fire in my heart
burns a craving for another moment
another day of a beating song that
plays as frequent as a radio station
playing a new hit
so I recite words that my sincerity writes
from the emotions that my heart gives
wow
I see my scriptures of devotion
writing new thoughts as seconds pass
wanting so much to
not just to tell you, but remind you that
I love you so much
my dearest love
I feel I am complete when I hold you
I feel whole when I kiss you,and
I feel invincible when I am beside you
for you are
THE BREATH OF ME
— Rich-The-Poet, Jun 18, 2010
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sammysew
15 years 11 months ago
wow!!! pure emotion and what
Sinthya
15 years 11 months ago
Wow