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Sinthya
Sinthya
May 24, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

You laugh

You think you are a threat. I dont see your point. You think of me as a project. I thought of you as if you were a new car. I sacrifice my feelings. You think you can buy more. I hurt, You laugh. I cry, You laugh more. You really think your a threat, But i fear no more.
— Sinthya, May 24, 2010

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magics02

16 years ago

I really liked this

little piece of work you did here sinythia. Only the last line the i is not capped like all the rest of them. And maybe when you have -you are- in the first line carry the same wording in line 1 perhaps to make it flow and look better more standardized? Let me know what you think? Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

Great! This is the grrl

Great! This is the grrl power stuff I was talking about! You really think your a threat, You really think you're a threat, that's all I can suggest on this strong, pithy piece. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,