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Sinthya
Sinthya
May 24, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

You laugh

You think you are a threat. I dont see your point. You think of me as a project. I thought of you as if you were a new car. I sacrifice my feelings. You think you can buy more. I hurt, You laugh. I cry, You laugh more. You really think your a threat, But i fear no more.
— Sinthya, May 24, 2010

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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

I really liked this

little piece of work you did here sinythia. Only the last line the i is not capped like all the rest of them. And maybe when you have -you are- in the first line carry the same wording in line 1 perhaps to make it flow and look better more standardized? Let me know what you think? Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 1 month ago

Great! This is the grrl

Great! This is the grrl power stuff I was talking about! You really think your a threat, You really think you're a threat, that's all I can suggest on this strong, pithy piece. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,

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