The Time

Many years i thought
i can just get by
now its the end and im still here
stuck in athe same building
the same place it started
at the age of five
nineteen now and did not pass by
i sit
sit and hope to learn.

— Sinthya, Jun 23, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: New York

Favorite Poets: I cant really say i have a favorite!

Critiques

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Hello

Nice to meet you. I think this self- reflective poem is clever, but I would do with out the dual "I thought" just a suggestion. Always, Cat

whitetea

15 years 11 months ago

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We go through so many exhausting motions in life dont we, good journalistic write.

weirdelf

15 years 11 months ago

I know I can be blunt with you

this is a "rite of passage" poem, not your best but I know you needed to write it. stuck in athe same building the same place it started perhaps stuck in the same place still where it started Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,