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Sinthya
Sinthya
Jun 23, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

The Time

Many years i thought 
i can just get by
now its the end and im still here
stuck in athe same building
the same place it started
at the age of five
nineteen now and did not pass by
i sit
sit and hope to learn.
— Sinthya, Jun 23, 2010

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Country/Region: New York

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Hello

Nice to meet you. I think this self- reflective poem is clever, but I would do with out the dual "I thought" just a suggestion. Always, Cat
whitetea

whitetea

16 years ago

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We go through so many exhausting motions in life dont we, good journalistic write.
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

I know I can be blunt with you

this is a "rite of passage" poem, not your best but I know you needed to write it. stuck in athe same building the same place it started perhaps stuck in the same place still where it started Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,

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