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Let Us Pray

This time,

no crime

one light,one shine

GOD SENT

me on a mission

2

forgive the  struggle

follow my heart,as i

lead in this life of uncertainty

with no expectations

just hopes wishes

prayers for others

as i fall on a

 path on my own

though

feeling grown

making changes

heading in the right direction

feeling love and affection

the LORD  as my protection

walking with my head high

as I walk through today’s night

only negative thoughts to fight,but

getting easy by morning light

so here it is,

another day  I am gifted with breath

staring hard at the world to see whats left

how can I help

DEAR JESUS

your in control, tell me what to do

what do I need to know

how do I get my point across, and

get others to listen

HE SAID

tell them about me, and

explain what they been missing

LET US PRAY
 

— Rich-The-Poet, Jun 29, 2010

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weirdelf

weirdelf

15 years 11 months ago

Doing better than praying

personal abrogation of responsibility leads to the ills of the world. Not very interesting poetry either. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,
Sinthya

Sinthya

15 years 11 months ago

Amen

this is so beautiful. i love the flow. <3 Sinthya <3 "Live life each day to the fullest'. 'You never know when it will end."
M

magics02

15 years 11 months ago

I like it Rich

Needed a little tweak here or there if you like I can revisit it with a fresh mind and fresh eyes. Nice in chat tonite. Have a blessed weekend. Love at ya guy Mona xoxo