Alice Ember

May 12, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Why is it wrong?

Is it so wrong
to want to be loved?
To want to be held?
To want to hear no lies?
To only want the
sun to set when
it has to?

All you guys are the same
Say anything to get what
you want, what you need

Well, guess what
Mr. Cheater
I'm not coming back
so, stay on your knees
until you bleed and after

Cause hell will freeze solid
before I ever let you up
off your bloody knees
You broke my pride
my respect even my innocence

Mr. Cheater or better known as
Mr. Dylan
stay the hell
away from me
or there will
be a great need
for testical reconstruction

— Alice Ember, May 12, 2010

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magics02

16 years ago

Whoa Lraine Dobbit

Wow ALice you on a roll with this one, Lord knows don't use no knife on Dylan.. I know it is figure of speech used here..you got it out and now you must feel better about it.. Cheating friends there is alot of that in ones lifetime. Rise above and a new day appears when your in love again...thinking of you and big hugs at ya gal.. Love,Mona xxxoxoxox

Alice Ember

16 years ago

No, no knife

I'm trying to rise but, there always seems to be a black hole sucking me back down. But, thank you Mona for commenting and the internet hug :p Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to

Beauregard

16 years ago

Alana,

It looks like it's time to take a break from these two-timing boys. Have some Alana-time. Love yourself and know that you are loved by those who matter! "Never allow someone to be your priority while allowing yourself to be their option." Alana should come first. If a guy happens to be a part of your life, then he better be grateful and loyal, but if they're not going to treat you right then don't let them be a part of your life. You can't let them be a need. You have to be able to be independent and you can't let them break you down. They're stupid and greedy and not worth your suffering! Will come back with a critique tomorrow, got to go to bed! Kelsey

the_fool

16 years ago

stupid men! lol!

sounds like you still think about him a bit. hate and anger are as strong emotionally as love and affection. and having any emotions about someone is still being emotionally connected. but still, what a douche this dylan is. t_f

Alice Ember

16 years ago

Thank you all

Thank you all for the comments and the advice. Love you all Alice Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to

Hooded Stranger

16 years ago

Angry rant

Alice, angry rant and he probably deserves it all, but hey, don't tar all us lads with the same brush: All you guys are the same Say anything to get what you want, what you need I am sure they aren't all the same...I'll be off trying to find one who isn't...I could be some time! Lol! I hope the writing made you feel somewhat calmer regards, HS (holding tightly to his testicles) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

Alice Ember

16 years ago

Good luck

Good luck with your searching. I know there are some decent guys I just haven't seen one. I've known a few just never met them face to face Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to

Sinthya

16 years ago

wow sweetie

this is deep dont hurt him just because he cant see the great things in front of him. see you in school tomarrow!

Alice Ember

16 years ago

no promises

Scratch that I made a promise not to hit anyone tomorrow so, I won't but, you know I never promised my friends wouldn't do anything. mwhaha I'm evil Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to

Kumar

16 years ago

I wonder myself if it is

I wonder myself if it is wrong to love a certain someone. I get jugded for who im am and who I love. And it sucks that idk what to do. should i go after him or just give up on my dream. Its all so confusing.

hippiepoet69

16 years ago

Irish Eyes

give him one last little tear. Then stand up tall. You deserve better than him. There are a few good men out there. If I was younger and not hopelessly in love already. My Irish blood would would be boiling for a fine Irish lass like you. Take Care. huey

Alice Ember

16 years ago

Thanks huey

Your such a sweetie. hahaha I'm fine now. He's tried to come back but, you know my irsih blood just won't have it. Oh well i guess our blood does chose for us. Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to

loved

16 years ago

lovely thoughts

by now all should know men want only one thing without commitment please do read my poem YOU JUST CAN'T in a similar vein published in TERRY LYLES recently published book SAY IT AIN'T SO YOU JUST CAN'T BY LOVELY HONEY www.Terry Lyle.com if you give my reference perhaps she will give a discount nice book