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May 18, 2010
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taking control
You left me speechless,
Shameful,
Powerful,
Your cocky voice flows threw me.
Just like the blood from the bite of a vampire.
I’m unafraid,
I’m unafraid.
you made me this way.
the threats of your weapons have nothing on me now.
You lie asleep, i muzzle you.
As if you were a mad dog.
The gun is loaded.
The secret is out.
No more abuse,
No more abuse.
My heart was stolen and i want it back.
one shot is all it takes.
the Vodka can no longer numb the pain.
you dared me to get mad
You dared me to do this.
And now I want nothing but the truth.
— Sinthya, May 18, 2010
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RobeccaJane Le…
16 years 2 months ago
i totally love this poem,
Sinthya
16 years 1 month ago
i love you too thanks you
weirdelf
16 years 1 month ago
fucking awesome!
weirdelf
16 years 1 month ago
You have a poetic voice
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