SAKTHEEE2007

Member since February 18, 2011

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I MISSED YOU

Posted Apr 12, 2013 · 19 lines · 1 critiques

I missed you

I missed you Dear

For the past twenty eight hours

You are eighty kilometers away from me

You are sleeping eating there as a child but

I have lost everything here cause I missed you

I cannot forget your angle smile and

I cannot digest your absence for such a long hours

You have moved to shape your future but

This old man missed his present with you

I may dream on your future but

I am not so strong enough to meet this loneliness

Send me your smile to guide me in dark

Send me your childish speech

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To forget all my worries and pains

Forty hell days I will have to spend

To meet your face in smile and bliss

My daughter! My love!

Come dear to heal my pains and wounds.

SAKTHEEE2007’s timeline

February 2026
18 Wed

Anniversary
15 years of membership
February 2021
18 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2016
18 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
April 2013
14 Sun

Received a critique
on I MISSED YOU from @Ian.T
"Sad thoughts of someone dear being missed nearly as soon as they have left if not before. This is written nearly like a letter not sure which poetry form to put it in, this sense of loss can be put in so many poetic way…"
12 Fri

Posted a poem
I MISSED YOU
"I missed you"
Open thread 19 lines
February 2012
18 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
06 Mon

Received a critique
on SHED NOT from @Geezer
"that I got the idea of this one in one try. I think you are trying to say that there are many different ways to God. It is short and to the point and yet mystical too. That's my take anyways. ~ Geezer"
04 Sat

Posted a poem
SHED NOT
"Shed not tears"
Open thread 8 lines
February 2011
18 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
July 2010
11 Sun

Received a critique
on Pray for us from @jamadarie
"We often look to see his hand in what is, to see if he will stop what should not be and to level the playing fields between us. But, where we get confused is forgetting that he is a God of "free will". Your free will, m…"
March 2010
26 Fri

Received a critique
on My Kisses and Love from @weirdelf
"Your English has improved a lot. I almost gave up reading your lovely poems because you did not take feedback and revise your poems. This is good. Cheers, Jess, “The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must e…"
08 Mon

Posted a poem
My Kisses and Love
"My Kisses and Love"
Open thread 18 lines
February 2010
27 Sat

Received a critique
on My Emperor’s Way from @mark
"Dear Sakthee, it sems to me you have conqured what you have been trying to accomplish. I really don't see or feel your home country dielect here. Very good Sakthee. It can be a most difficult thing to overcome learning…"
26 Fri

Received a critique
on Love in a Mutiny from @greeneyes
"What a wonderful tale you told. I liked this very much. greeneyes"
25 Thu

Posted a poem
Love in a Mutiny
"Love in a mutiny"
Open thread 33 lines
22 Mon

Received a critique
on Pray for us from @Geezer
"the root of all evil. The LOVE of money is the root of all evil. Keep your head up Steven. I have missed you, and my thoughts and prayers are always with you. I have a new chat time coming up, it will be two hrs. earlie…"
22 Mon

Received a critique
on Pray for us from @Kailashana
"The love of money rules the earth. Heaven is in the giving away.. Thank you for your poem. ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti"
21 Sun

Posted a poem
Pray for us
"Pray for us"
Open thread 26 lines
17 Wed

Posted a poem
Love s Birth and Death
"Love borns in a sight"
Open thread 5 lines
05 Fri

Posted a poem
My Emperor’s Way
"My Emperor’s Way"
Open thread 19 lines
01 Mon

Posted a poem
Lips 2 Lips
"Lips 2 Lips"
Open thread 15 lines
January 2010
20 Wed

Posted a poem
My Angel Flies
"  My Angel Flies"
Open thread 23 lines
18 Mon

Posted a poem
My Last day in The Hell
"It is my last day in this hell"
Open thread 19 lines
December 2009
30 Wed

Posted a poem
Good bye Horrible 2009
"  Good bye to Horrible 2009"
Open thread 21 lines
27 Sun

Posted a poem
Back to my old venture
"Back to Old Venture"
Open thread 15 lines
September 2009
15 Tue

Critiqued
"Gypsy Girl" by @greeneyes
"She would smile sweetly, and say “someday you will be here with me” “Then I will show how wonderful the life of a Gypsy can be” It is real and true The life of gypsy is really happiest and worry less life They can pave…"
August 2009
31 Mon

Critiqued
"Weirdelf, an ode to a poet..." by @Fleur MacDonald
"NO WORDS TO EXCLAIM THE BEAUTY OF THIS POEM TOO OOO OOOO OOOOOO GOOOD! SAKTHEEEE S RAVEEE CHANDRAN"
22 Sat

Critiqued
"Winter 4" by @Candlewitch
"Dear co poet Excellent lines and nice description really enjoyed"
January 2008
20 Sun

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
November 2007
14 Wed

Critiqued
"idiots" by @CryingPagan89
"Excellent poem which describes your own ideals and your independent thoughts nice and good piece to read with love Sakthi"
14 Wed

Critiqued
"Ick" by @barbsdad2003
"DEAR THATHA VERY GOOD THATHA not to feel that old age and inability is a curse It is a boon to all human souls for giving rest But it may give some pains and tears.Don't feel your old age as a burden or trouble It is an…"
October 2007
27 Sat

Critiqued
"Warrior's Soul" by @purplemoondoll
"DEAR CO POET With high standards and truth, Your poem seems to be good and pleasing to read. Congrats"
September 2007
19 Wed

Critiqued
"The End" by @oklahoma_girl2009
"Your poem is good and nice take a trip to Mars and sky through your poetry and take us with you"
16 Sun

Critiqued
"ABORTION" by @ellisville
"With tears and limitless a n g e r on this society well written and conveyed what you have wish to say congrats sakthee"
July 2007
15 Sun

Highest posting month
July 2007 — 32 poems
10 Tue

First critique offered
on "Not many people have read John Lennons poetry, here is one" by @weirdelf
09 Mon

First publication
MY GRANDPA AND HIS STICK

15 years of membership

10 years of membership

5 years of membership

on I MISSED YOU from @Ian.T

One year of membership

on SHED NOT from @Geezer

Membership begins

on Pray for us from @jamadarie

on My Kisses and Love from @weirdelf

on My Emperor’s Way from @mark

on Love in a Mutiny from @greeneyes

on Pray for us from @Geezer

on Pray for us from @Kailashana

"Gypsy Girl" by @greeneyes

"Weirdelf, an ode to a poet..." by @Fleur MacDonald

"Winter 4" by @Candlewitch

100 poems posted

"idiots" by @CryingPagan89

"Ick" by @barbsdad2003

"Warrior's Soul" by @purplemoondoll

"The End" by @oklahoma_girl2009

"ABORTION" by @ellisville

July 2007 — 32 poems

on "Not many people have read John Lennons poetry, here is one" by @weirdelf

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