My own self written verdict

My own self written verdict

It is my own self written verdict
from the devine state of my mind
It is very close to my actions and
the verdict has been from my devince state of consious

I am guilty to my sixth sense and
to the noble vision of my Lord
He gave me to this world to help others
in their times of need
My selfish mind denied his words and
insticated me live in luxuries

I lost my mercy and love and
failed to show on weak,poor creatures
I enjoyed happy on the other's pains and tears
I show nothing to my co souls and
had a lot from them in this life

I am guilty to my sixth sense and
to the noble vision of my Lord
My eyes failed to see tiny creations and
their sacrifices in their life
My eyes have seen only the sky and stars but
failed to see down trodden lives and their wounds

I will have to do some thing to others
I will have beg relief from The Sacred Heart
He will definitely excuse me and
will bless me to live as pure

Saktheee

— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 20, 2009

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weirdelf-test

16 years 8 months ago

and confess everything to

and confess everything to your priest. That is my cynical side talking. The truth is that you acknowldge your failures and want to do better. This makes you a good man, your poem is eloquent in your admission of your failures. I was brought up by Catholic nuns who hated their life, themselves, and even, I suspect, their God. I feel deeply touched, maybe even a little embarrassed, that you expose yourself here. But you must know it is not you, not what defines you. I don't know much about poetry but here I hear a good man being too hard on himself. I have an instinct, a feeling, that you do the very best you can. Sorry I can't comment about your poetry style, I have very little knowledge. But my feeling is that you are a good, sensitive man who does the best he can, but can't heal the world. I would also love to heal the world. meow yip, purr, yowl and perfect body language of approval, contempt or demand