Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Dec 27, 2009
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
Back to my old venture
Back to Old Venture
I walked for a long to my new home
I found there only disappointments
I searched my new heaven in the sky
I found there only clouds
I ran behind many angels
All of them were turned as devils
With all tired
I returned back to my old nest
There is a nice welcome to my soul
There is warm call from my angel
Decided to stay there
As a captain of my old boat
Decided to continue
Old venture in that boat
— SAKTHEEE2007, Dec 27, 2009
Share this poem
Critiques
Geezer
16 years 5 months ago
Venture...