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Back to my old venture

Back to Old Venture

I walked for a long to my new home

I found there only disappointments

I searched my new heaven in the sky

I found there only clouds

I ran behind many angels

All of them were turned as devils

With all tired

I returned back to my old nest

There is a nice welcome to my soul

There is warm call from my angel

Decided to stay there

As a captain of my old boat

Decided to continue

Old venture in that boat


— SAKTHEEE2007, Dec 27, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Venture...

Great work! No criticisms this time. A real nice piece, and I like the line: I walked for a long to my new home. I am assuming that you meant it exactly the way you wrote it. Longing for a change seems to fit. Hope you had a good holiday, Your friend, Gee