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A Prince Of a Night

A Prince Of  a Night

His bowl was full of bread  and
peenies,some pounds
He walked and walked to her home
After finished his dinner
H e again walked and reached her home
She welcomed him with a smile and
taken him to her bed room as a Prince
Seconds and minutes have passed as candy
That night came to end and
the day dawns as his enemy
She took all his pennies and pounds and
sent him out again as a begger
Again he called his masters to help him
W e are there as that begger
Our life and pleasures are too limited as that begger's night
To enjoy a night
He lost all his earnings of that day
W e are losing our life
to enjoy a little bit of pleasure
Again we are crying for the mercy of our Master as a begger
— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 22, 2009

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weirdelf-test

16 years 8 months ago

Did he visit a prostitute?

or was it unrequited love? Or am I missing the profound meaning of your poem? kind regards, Jean, meow, yip, purr, yowl and perfect body language of approval, contempt or demand
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SAKTHEEE2007

16 years 8 months ago

You are right

Yes You are right he visited a prostitute to spend a night and lost his money We are losing our days of life in vanishing pleasures and crying in our difficulties for the mercy of our master [God] Saktheee
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Hi

Have u thought of writing a short story?, I think you would do quite well.This tale is good. Lyz. X