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Sep 18, 2009
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Test On a Poor man
Test on a poor man
A test is going on me
to place me in the peak of heights
In this process
He placed me inthe midst of poverty fire
Hungry is cruel
At the sme time the starving of our kids is too cruel
Prestiege and self respect is precious
a small blow is enough to break in to pieces
Asking not ,any thing from realtives
Every grain from them will carry a lot of pain and tears
Pennyless persons are their jokers
My crys and tears are thier enchanting plays
No peace even in temples to this victim
Home is the hell and my shadow will turn as enemy
Wherever I go
My poverty preface will reach before me
My lovable wife and kids too throw him by words
This is a test going on to Purify me
to gaive me a precious gift after this life
After this life whatever He give
what it will serve to me to my present needs.
A ladder is enough to go to my normal heights
No planes are required to reach the sky and stars
Saktheee
A test is going on me
to place me in the peak of heights
In this process
He placed me inthe midst of poverty fire
Hungry is cruel
At the sme time the starving of our kids is too cruel
Prestiege and self respect is precious
a small blow is enough to break in to pieces
Asking not ,any thing from realtives
Every grain from them will carry a lot of pain and tears
Pennyless persons are their jokers
My crys and tears are thier enchanting plays
No peace even in temples to this victim
Home is the hell and my shadow will turn as enemy
Wherever I go
My poverty preface will reach before me
My lovable wife and kids too throw him by words
This is a test going on to Purify me
to gaive me a precious gift after this life
After this life whatever He give
what it will serve to me to my present needs.
A ladder is enough to go to my normal heights
No planes are required to reach the sky and stars
Saktheee
— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 18, 2009
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Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
Hope springs eternal...
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
hello again