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SAKTHEEE2007
Feb 01, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Lips 2 Lips

Lips 2 Lips

Very sweet and delicious fruits
to every one in romance
Nothing can be compared with it
Such a precious gift of us
God has created these to enjoy in this earth but
few go in the way of penance
Love transfers it’s rays through a kiss and
Conquers everyone by it’s bliss
Lips play climax in the peak of romance and
heals all pains in a fraction of second
It is an ornament given by Our Father
to cheer up in the life in the midst of agonies
Realize My Dear before your Kiss
teach this way to our kids to keep this world in Heaven
— SAKTHEEE2007, Feb 01, 2010

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R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 4 months ago

wonderfully written. my view

wonderfully written. my view is that kiss is nod the God send but invented by men in the course of evolution shan.
Mark

Mark

16 years 4 months ago

Sak !

Hi and how are you? Some things come to mind here about this poetry. First you say Our Father. This is for me outstanding poetry. You give your god a name. I do not believe I have seen this in my time here on Neo and I have read only a fair percentage of the poetry here (know that) Kiss for me here is a metaphore. Is that your intent because it seems up front that you are in the meaning of kissing with lips and that is a healing thing true. A kiss by a hand for pain it shall stop as a thigh may meet the sole... see lol can be fun. Great to see you, Mark "some things change, some things do not"