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I am in a Pond



I am in a Pond

 

I am in a pond as a muddy water

Nothing is visible and clear to my vision

Though it is a bright day,

every thing is dark and glare to my eyes

I have failed to reach my ocean and

failed to make my self as a dry land

I became a cursed hallow pit and

my thoughts are still revolving that pit

Though there are many gutters from rivers

Still I  am a nasty dirt pit

Nothing has come to have a water for it’s thirst

Cause I am a waste waterless pond

All my booms  have turned as curse

I am still in that pond as a muddy water

Nothing is visible and clear to my vision

Though there are many lives are crossing

I am still kept as isolated pond

I don’t have any green memory to recollect

from the past to present  I am there in

                [that pond as a  muddy water]


— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 05, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

hello

I can certainly relate well to this piece. My favorite lines are: I am still in that pond as a muddy water Nothing is visible and clear to my vision Though there are many lives are crossing I am still kept as isolated pond I don’t have any green memory to recollect from the past to present I am there in [that pond as a muddy water] I hope that this feeling will pass for both of us and that the dark clouds roll on by. Always, Cat