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you're an individual yes indeed, never plant those others' seeds look for the sport it will set you free and keep it a secret, don't even tell me ! you might consider making aline a line :-) Thanks

Don't want to push you around slow down and clean it up some and I think you got some thing here wait I need another Beer didn't see where masa never mind i see now The line up Got it sneaky but cute 4th line {you to your} all clones maybe

another line,and even though the dumbed masses(religious and Non-ist alike)still wait to prove they where right,never to see a gleam of a much better possibility. Illumination? That would leave out a whole dimension of perspective.No wonder some people choose to be ignorant it is so easy...to not think for your self,and much better to blame someone/something else when we foul. In ink, Dabbler

Needs cleaning up a little - but its a great poem and I like the message. Especially the last lines - i’m not a clone waiting to be massacred standing in aline becuase some brainwasher said so Make aline a line and becuase because and you may have it nailed. Nice work. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

Is the type of poem i would like 2 take and slap it in a few people's face and say "wake up you idiot!!!!" i know a lot of people that just do not think for themselves and they r the most annoying people i have met and will ever meet. Think for yourself people and quit being brainwashed by gossip-bunnies, geez! i like this poem it is completely my style, you stole the words right out of my mouth at exactly the right moment in my life, thanx. ***Lovely am I*** Valene

hay this is raw and blunt the title does fit the poem, raw flow throughout it appeals cause i know the feeling poeple have clicks and gangs religion and most follow blindly it is a cool share great rant!!!

but you betray your adolescent egocentricity (whatever your age is) by only posting poems and never commenting on others. This is a poetry workshop, not a showplace, if you continue to un-involve yourself with this community you may find yourself ignored. I like your poetry a lot, but give something back. What? Do you think we have nothing better to do than just read and comment on your poems? cheers, Jess

Excellent poem which describes your own ideals and your independent thoughts nice and good piece to read with love Sakthi