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My Emperor’s Way

My Emperor’s Way
It is a way of emperor
In which I am walking with my stick
It is the crown of that great
I am holding in my head
We both are same in powers
to command others to obey
We both are for the people
Work for their peace and safety
I am also having a fort to go
as the emperor’s fort
We both are sleep less
For protecting our people
H e is serving with luxuries but
I am serving with scarcities
His feast will be in golden plates but
my food will be un certain
Though we may differ but
My way is the emperor’s way



— SAKTHEEE2007, Feb 05, 2010

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16 years 3 months ago

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Dear Sakthee, it sems to me you have conqured what you have been trying to accomplish. I really don't see or feel your home country dielect here. Very good Sakthee. It can be a most difficult thing to overcome learning English. Continue working and writing please. I like many of your themes, and admire much of your thinking, and would like to see you succeed. Mark/Geezer