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God

                                         God

Who is God ?
What for He?
Did he serve any thing for poor and sufferers?
H e is here for protecting bigshots  and
He is here only to safeguard all emperors
There are millions and trillions of gods and temples
Wht is there to us
Can we get even mouth ful of food by  his powers?
Nothing  is answer and his reply is silence
All His grace only to them but
Not for us and nothing for us
We are useless creatures and burdens on His head
They are His Lovable vistors
They can mint money in all along their way
What we can do for Him?
except our tears and demands
So he is there for them  and hear only their cries
Prayers are nothing but a shifting of ur faith on invisible
Achevements are nothing but the fruits of your hard work
Work and Work to raise
as the mountain of Himalayas in life
Not to become as a waste
God is the creation from the rich platforms and
not from our road side huts

Saktheee


— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 15, 2009

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Hi

I feel your anguish in this write, and I think a lot feel the same. I just wish that things could be different around the world. As they say, the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. Great write. Love Lyz. XX
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

Just gonna...

Just going to say for now....Wow! i will come back to this one Sakkkkk, to give it the attention I would like, but wow! See you later with some critique. Gee.
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Orphani

16 years 8 months ago

when God thundered his law

when God thundered his law and perfect way who answered and obeyed the God who made all things, and put breath in man.Man rejected God and so for a time man will reap what he sews, but make no mistake, his prophets will arise at his will, and his kingdom will be established, and knoledge and justice will fill the earth. Let him who has ears hear The word of the living God. Isaiah 57 is your answer.
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SAKTHEEE2007

16 years 8 months ago

Godis the creation of rich

Dear sir Thank you for your valuable comments in real God is the creation of rich to enforce their powers on the poor in the name of God. From the begining of this world.Devils and cruels were blessed in all aspects good and noble were cursed even for their basic needs All noble hearted souls were killed and tortured at that times there was no support or protection from the said God,because all cruels and devils were rich and powerful so God didn't like to acquire enemity and opposition of such powerful elements God is purely a creation of Rich and Powerful hands Saktheee S Ravichandran
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

God Is...

You forget about faith. Job lost everything, with no hope of return, but when he resisted the promise of it's return by the 'Evil One' The 'Lord' had pity. O.K. now to critique. I am going to make this a collaboration of ours. Go to your private messages, and we will write this one together. Gee