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A Crown and my battles
A Crown and my battles
My crown is there far away from me
The way to reach is too hard and risky
Many battles are going between me and to it
Obstacles and barriers are more and more but
I am walking towards my crown
Though there are many wounds in my body
I am steadily moving to wards my crown
It is in my vision and it is nearing me
I n between me and to my crown many battles are going on
My legs are moving consistently towards it
There may be many thorns and pits on my way
My will is so strong to swear that crown
Thousands or lakhs may scold and tease me now
Millions will wait to that moment to greet to my success
My crown is there far away from me
The way to reach is too hard and risky
I will be their emperor from that second
Shedding blood from my body is nothing and
Shedding tears from my eyes are nothing
Everything will be come scars of my victories and
Everyone will praise my success
There I will built my empire and
There I will occupy my people
Scolding enemies will be the first admirers of my court
Teasing friends will write my story of success
My crown is there far away from me
The way to reach is too hard and risky
Critiques
lyz
16 years 9 months ago
Hi