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A Crown and my battles

A Crown and my battles

 

My crown is there far away from me

The way to reach is too hard and risky

Many battles are going between me and to it

Obstacles and barriers are more and more  but

I am walking towards my crown

Though there are many wounds in my body

I am steadily moving to wards my crown

It is in my vision and it is nearing me

I n between me and to my crown many battles are going on

My legs are moving consistently towards it

There may be many thorns and pits on my way

My will is so strong to swear that crown

Thousands or lakhs may scold and tease me now

Millions will wait to that moment to greet to my success

My crown is there far away from me

The way to reach is too hard and risky

I will be their emperor from that second

Shedding blood from my body is nothing and

Shedding tears from my eyes are nothing

Everything will be come scars of my victories and

Everyone will praise my  success

There I will built my empire  and

There  I will occupy my people

Scolding enemies will be the first admirers of my  court

Teasing friends will write my story of success

My crown is there far away from me

The way to reach is too hard and risky

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Sep 07, 2009

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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Hi

I enjoyed this poem, a little sad but heartfelt. And I would like to say sorry that I did not know when I commented on your poem, Anna Come Down, was a man. A re comment: It was written with a saddened heart and I did enjoy the read as I have with this one, Thank you for sharing. Lyz.