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SAKTHEEE2007
Feb 17, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Love s Birth and Death

Love borns in a sight
 grows in words
flaes in  kisses
Peak in licks and sucks and
dies in fuck
— SAKTHEEE2007, Feb 17, 2010

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 3 months ago

Love's Birth and Death

I get the theme Steven, however there are a couple of things that I have noticed here. You need to change the first line to read something like; Love [is] born with sight. And the word flaes, I think you meant [flares] Peak needs an [s] I am pleased to see you working on new styles and look forward to seeing more. Good job! ~ Gee