Kyarain

Member since February 27, 2009

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Open for suggestion

Posted May 13, 2010 · 30 lines · 1 critiques

This is your dread
Your weeping willow tears
You're late for a date with death
He hates to be kept waiting.
Pop some X, your best friend.
Otherwise you can't stomach the situation.
Stop touching me
You scream
Stay silent,
Don't speak
Your dreams are filthy
You disgust me.

Molly
Ms. Mary Jane

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Let's crack open a can of coke
You'll never taste the acid
Melts away your teeth,
Your soul
You'll never get another
But who needs another one
When you've got heroin?
Drugs are the lords of the modern era
You can't escape the court
Once you entered
Don't you want to win?
Shoot me up
Dirty needles
Come to call.

Turn away, don't watch this.
No need to see my fall.

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May 2010
14 Fri

Received a critique
on Open for suggestion from @the_fool
"well, everyone has to have a hobby. fun read, good flow. don't think the bold font is necessary here, but what do i know. very good. t_f"
13 Thu

Posted a poem
Open for suggestion
"This is your dread"
Open thread 30 lines
February 2010
26 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2009
22 Mon

Critiqued
"Perseverance" by @paul
"Keep up the good work, you GORGEOUS GREEK XD. You're an amazing person and poet. Peace, love, and dreams Ky~"
20 Sat

Received a critique
on Loss from @Rett
"My Goodness, I loved this one Kya and the ending is terrific. I've lots of experience with Kudzu and it can grow up to a foot a day. I loved the way you wove that into your overall meaning. Well done. Respectfully, Rett…"
15 Mon

Received a critique
on Loss from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"Well, girl, you never cease to amaze me. This is quite powerful, especially with the blunt ending "You've lost it." You've got me pretty dang speechless here....all I can say is another fantastic job. Peace love n hugs…"
14 Sun

Posted a poem
Loss
"Insanity is a game"
Open thread 21 lines
09 Tue

Received a critique
on Speak Up from @weirdelf
"beautifully written and heartwrenching. A courageous and important piece. I only wonder about the switching between first and third person. Is it two people or does it point out the dissociative disorder so common to ab…"
May 2009
27 Wed

Received a critique
on Speak Up from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"As always, a stunner of a poem, dear Ky. Just one typo- briliant=brilliant. Otherwise I'm darn near speechless, girl. Does 5 stars say enough? The ending just completely...I don't know how to describe it...it's shocking…"
26 Tue

Received a critique
on Behind the Curtain from @iverhyck
"Sorry if I hurt you, but you see I prefer simplicity, and here there's some ponderosity. Konstantin."
25 Mon

Posted a poem
Speak Up
"What did you tell the teacher?"
Open thread 24 lines
24 Sun

Received a critique
on Behind the Curtain from @iverhyck
"Sorry, I'm absent-minded. Konstantin."
24 Sun

Received a critique
on Behind the Curtain from @iverhyck
"It's intersting to read. Beautifully written though a bit... hem... overdone. Konstantin."
22 Fri

Posted a poem
Behind the Curtain
" My name is Nemisis"
Open thread 48 lines
17 Sun

Posted a poem
Shambles
"Are we all alone? Empty in the wake, the dawning of new days."
Open thread 20 lines
16 Sat

Critiqued
"As i see it " by @mandaa
"Better form, striking subject, direct language. I loved it! If you really every feel this way, come here, we're only a step away. Always someone to listen... Congrats on your second post! Much love, peace, and dreams, Y…"
15 Fri

Posted a poem
Not What You Expect
" The sticky things flesh gets away with "
Open thread 14 lines
15 Fri

Critiqued
"Reality" by @Breakinglogic
"Loved it, often I share that view... that is my sight of "reality". Only one mistake I caught, you misspelled "begins" in the line "here bigins" Once again, your efforts are applauded. Peace, love, and dreams Ky~"
15 Fri

Critiqued
"When I Walk" by @Breakinglogic
"I loved the lines " Under my feet Ten thousand degrees of Fahrenheit heat All compressed Under one pair Of ten and a halves The mountains my stairs And the rivers my paths Free flowing in Every direction My words made l…"
15 Fri

Highest posting month
May 2009 — 6 poems
12 Tue

Posted a poem
Instinct
"Did you forget what day it is?"
Open thread 18 lines
10 Sun

Critiqued
"Love her Gaze through the Rear view Mirror" by @Mansel
""Can I seek affection anew, Could I forget all about you, May I move on from now to new. Can I love another too." This line spoke strongly to me, reminds what I've felt and thought and questioned recently. Thank you for…"
10 Sun

Critiqued
"This is me " by @mandaa
"I can feel your emotions flowing through the words. There are some mistakes in spelling in grammar though... not sure if those were intentional or simply overlooked. The "done ever feel weak" should be perhaps "don't ev…"
09 Sat

Critiqued
"Undefeated Faith " by @paul
"Yay for increasing your vocabulary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Macho love to yah man XP"
08 Fri

Posted a poem
Untitled
" Unwelcome novelties"
Open thread 15 lines
April 2009
20 Mon

Posted a poem
Eloquence In Anger
"Ebony and Ivory"
Open thread 25 lines
March 2009
01 Sun

Critiqued
"....." by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"Thank you, for your time and friendship, and for your words. True definition of beauty is above XD. Thats what REAL poetry is. You should enter this somewhere, ppl should read it... LOTS AND LOTS.. its my new favorite b…"
01 Sun

Most-discussed work
Circling the Same Old Cycles

11 critiques to date.
01 Sun

Posted a poem
Circling the Same Old Cycles
"I forgot what room I was in, the mirror standing before me."
Open thread 38 lines
February 2009
27 Fri

First critique offered
on "Vampire in the Mist (No. 1 in a series)" by @Tink
27 Fri

First publication
Alive again
27 Fri

Posted a poem
Alive again
"Dig deep into those wishes that once ran through your mind"
Open thread 18 lines
26 Thu

Joined Neopoet
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on Open for suggestion from @the_fool

One year of membership

"Perseverance" by @paul

on Loss from @Rett

on Loss from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress

on Speak Up from @weirdelf

on Speak Up from @Morgana Tragic Proprietress

on Behind the Curtain from @iverhyck

on Behind the Curtain from @iverhyck

on Behind the Curtain from @iverhyck

"As i see it " by @mandaa

"Reality" by @Breakinglogic

"When I Walk" by @Breakinglogic

May 2009 — 6 poems

"Love her Gaze through the Rear view Mirror" by @Mansel

"This is me " by @mandaa

"Undefeated Faith " by @paul

"....." by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress

on "Vampire in the Mist (No. 1 in a series)" by @Tink

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