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As i see it

Have you ever been sick of living
Everyday the same suffering,boring day
Where you are too scared of going to bed beacuse you never know if your going to wake up and not wanting to breath again
Im done with this life
Noe more crying
No more lying
No more working hard to keep my mouth shut
No more trying to find love
No more trying to go to school
No more bullshit.
— mandaa, May 16, 2009

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Kyarain

17 years ago

Striking

Better form, striking subject, direct language. I loved it! If you really every feel this way, come here, we're only a step away. Always someone to listen... Congrats on your second post! Much love, peace, and dreams, Your friend, Ky~