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Eloquence In Anger

Ebony and Ivory
Black and White
Dark and Light.

Ocean's blue waves are calling
Crashing against rocks and the sandy shores
Tide growing, pulsing, the beach, the breach
All of this to allure you, entice you.

Collapsing knees,
Head bent to the water,
An animal like all of us
Succumbing to primal instinct.

Pictures torn and wrinkled,
Paintings tattered and faded
Can we comprehend the image?
Will we understand the scene?

Hypocrite, Almighty
Liar above the rest
Expecting only innocence
Yet demanding all of it.

Toying, tripping, teasing...
This is just a game to you.
Fun, amusing, pathetic ways to entertain yourself.
Claiming you hate drama, when you're the biggest actor of all.

This is your career, lets watch it fall.
 Lets watch you crash and burn.
— Kyarain, Apr 20, 2009

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Kyarain

17 years 1 month ago

THANKS

Thanks so much twinny XD I tried to fix it, hopefully it'll be less of a bore to read now... Ky~
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orgami

17 years 1 month ago

always impressed at new impressions

the great rendering of ego reducing through the collapse the thin veneers that caught the eye the shadow houses tumbling where vivid plays performed lead in fade in dissapointment and time to move but not before watching the last thing to settle from the tangle roll to a stop Great poem glad I took the time to come all the way back here to catch this Well worth it !!
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Kyarain

17 years 1 month ago

Thanks so much

Love your poem/comment XD very beautiful. Appreciate you taking the time to read my work... you've no idea what it means to me
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mandaa

17 years ago

LOVE IT! :P

I love this poem it gives me goosebumps. Also i love ur writting style very uniqe :D
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Kyarain

17 years ago

I am so happy!

I'm glad you like it Mandaa! That is so sweet of you! Thanks for taking out the time to read my work... my writing is very important to me, and the time you took means a lot. I appreciate the praise/encouragement! Thanks again, Peace, love, and dreams... Ky~