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mandaa
May 10, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

This is me

Hope is to live for
him is to wish for
Confused,why not
people say stuff so what
cry whenever
say whatever
don't ever feel weak
just speak
be heard with no shame
end this,and reclaim my name

Faith.hope.love
   Amanda A
— mandaa, May 10, 2009

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Kyarain

17 years 1 month ago

A good start

I can feel your emotions flowing through the words. There are some mistakes in spelling in grammar though... not sure if those were intentional or simply overlooked. The "done ever feel weak" should be perhaps "don't ever feel weak"? And spaces after commas would be much appreciated. The words look a little scrunched together as a result. Other than that, good job, keep it up, and most of all WELCOME TO NEOPOET! Peace, love and dreams, Kyarain~ Here for yah if ever you need me~ to talk, to write, to listen
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mandaa

17 years ago

yah im bad at grammer

yah im bad at grammer ahaha but yah thanks for beinn honest(: