jamadarie

Member since August 15, 2009

Member for 16 years, 9 months

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Lessons: Players of Life

Posted Jul 11, 2010 · 9 lines · 4 critiques

Petals, petals cast their newness aside
velvety visions of beauty glistening with dew

Bright, aromatic tear shaped works of art
each with undefined flaws visible head on

No longer a part, of that which gets noticed
fading without regret, for they danced on air
lived out loud, felt the rain, greeted the sun

Free to be all they were intended to be
wonders, wonders these players of life

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August 2024
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August 2010
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July 2010
19 Mon

Received a critique
on Lessons: Players of Life from @weirdelf
"Cheers, Jess, Praise helps no poet, have the courage and generousity to give critique."
19 Mon

Received a critique
on Lessons: Players of Life from @xena465
"Brilliant poem with great visionary. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell"
11 Sun

Received a critique
on Birthdays from @magics02
"Hello again lady friend This one flows great and I love the wording, however just a feedback on it from me if you do not mind. I would do away with the caps at the beginning of every line and I would format it to flow b…"
11 Sun

Received a critique
on Lessons: Players of Life from @magics02
"Hey gal a lovely poem I liked alot. You did not ask for crit or any feedback but I feel compelled to just suggest breaking it down a bit and a continuance of it maybe in another poem. Other then that you got my vote gal…"
11 Sun

Critiqued
"Pray for us" by @SAKTHEEE2007
"We often look to see his hand in what is, to see if he will stop what should not be and to level the playing fields between us. But, where we get confused is forgetting that he is a God of "free will". Your free will, m…"
11 Sun

Received a critique
on Lessons: Players of Life from @Roscoe Lane
"beautifull thoughts, life is so fickle, we spend to much time worrying about life instead of living it. One thing, try not using capital letters at the beginning of each line, i was given this advice when i first came t…"
11 Sun

Posted a poem
Lessons: Players of Life
"Petals, petals cast their newness aside"
Open thread 9 lines
June 2010
20 Sun

Posted a poem
Birthdays
"Birthday wishes, dandy cakes, all lined up as family fakes"
Open thread 9 lines
17 Thu

Posted a poem
A Silly Willy Nilly Limmerick
" Wandering William wistfully wondered what willfully winning would be like He wondered so much, he fell out of touch and gave himself quite a fright"
Open thread 1 lines
16 Wed

Received a critique
on To My Brother: With Whom It Should Concern from @yenti
"I do hope this is a freedom in a verse, to me it sounds so true that this was you. We believe in personnal responsibility. They are always responsible for their own actions That you ever took on board all those things f…"
16 Wed

Posted a poem
To My Brother: With Whom It Should Concern
"First you taught me terror until our dog evened the score"
Open thread 16 lines
May 2010
12 Wed

Received a critique
on Failing from @xena465
"Deeply heartfelt...I love it. Rosina xena465"
12 Wed

Posted a poem
Failing
"What grand disappointment, our acts in vein"
Open thread 10 lines
05 Wed

Received a critique
on Carl from @Race_9togo
"I missed this poem of yours when you first posted it, unfortunately for me because this is good. At first - as usual - I thought that perhaps you should split the lines into smaller ones. But I am fixated on such editin…"
April 2010
08 Thu

Posted a poem
All Four Tires
"Rusted panels, bent in fenders"
Open thread 10 lines
March 2010
30 Tue

Posted a poem
Cousins
"Moments without words, longing greatly for lost time"
Open thread 18 lines
January 2010
19 Tue

Posted a poem
Flowers
" The music that played so sweetly once, was written a long time ago"
Open thread 8 lines
December 2009
21 Mon

Posted a poem
The Expected
"Second chances filled with wishes of  being among the living"
Open thread 8 lines
15 Tue

Posted a poem
Motherhood
"The best  that we could do is what we did with what we didn't know"
Open thread 12 lines
08 Tue

Posted a poem
Caustic Beings
"Waiting for the winds to stop"
Open thread 8 lines
November 2009
25 Wed

Posted a poem
Believe
"How fleeting are the moments, the hallmarks of belief"
Open thread 8 lines
September 2009
24 Thu

Critiqued
"A rope is not a rope till it binds" by @Orphani
"Your a lovely poet. Your words resonate like a brush of butter to the tongue. Delicate, delightful, rich and satisfying. What blissful images my mind formed around your words."
24 Thu

First critique offered
on "A rope is not a rope till it binds" by @Orphani
15 Tue

Highest posting month
September 2009 — 6 poems
August 2009
15 Sat

First publication
The Odyssey of a Lotus
14 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.