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Caustic Beings

Waiting for the winds to stop
My sails have lost their stride
Caustic beings of overload
Hastening failure to my side
Fortitude and willingness
No longer gape the gap
Resonating hatred felt
While fastened to her trap
— jamadarie, Dec 08, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 5 months ago

Acid Reign...

Nice little bit of rhyming! I'm kicking myself, for missing it. Lanquish no more on the lonely page. You have caught my eye! I will look for more of your writes in the future. ~ Geezer