Motherhood

I like this, its pretty deep and meaningful, but it needs structure. Try breaking up the lines a little. As an example... "The best that we could do is what we did with what we didn’t know" The best that we could do is what we did with what we didn't know If you do this you can drop the commas as well, making them the end of a line and the beginning of a new one. Also, when this is done, one can find words that can be dropped because the added structure allows it: "We care for our children without any known instructions" we care for our children without known instructions See what I mean? This gives your words more impact, it focuses the reader's attention and makes the meaning clearer. It also makes the read less daunting. A strange word, "daunting", in this context, I know, but often readers see a large solid block of words like this and are put off; daunted! But all of these are only suggestions; try them out, and see what you think. I like this a lot, I'm gonna read your others too. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race P.S. Love the quote from Einstein on your profile.