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Jul 11, 2010
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Lessons: Players of Life
Petals, petals cast their newness aside
velvety visions of beauty glistening with dew
Bright, aromatic tear shaped works of art
each with undefined flaws visible head on
No longer a part, of that which gets noticed
fading without regret, for they danced on air
lived out loud, felt the rain, greeted the sun
Free to be all they were intended to be
wonders, wonders these players of life
velvety visions of beauty glistening with dew
Bright, aromatic tear shaped works of art
each with undefined flaws visible head on
No longer a part, of that which gets noticed
fading without regret, for they danced on air
lived out loud, felt the rain, greeted the sun
Free to be all they were intended to be
wonders, wonders these players of life
— jamadarie, Jul 11, 2010
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Critiques
Roscoe Lane
15 years 11 months ago
Excellent.
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
As I look at the roses I see this poem
xena465
15 years 10 months ago
Welcome back Jamadarie
weirdelf
15 years 10 months ago
and?....