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jamadarie
Jun 17, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

A Silly Willy Nilly Limmerick

 Wandering William wistfully wondered what willfully winning would be like

He wondered so much, he fell out of touch and gave himself quite a fright


— jamadarie, Jun 17, 2010
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jamadarie

16 years 1 month ago

Things that make you go "Hmmm"

Imagine if you will, this young sinewy man wandering along a park as if contemplating his place in the universe, nodding at others as he passed them by, carrying a package tightly tucked under his right arm. He appeared to have all day to get there with no where to go. I began to wonder what, 'if" anything, kept him so obliviously occupied on this journey without an agenda.

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