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May 12, 2010
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Failing
What grand disappointment, our acts in vein
Like injured dogs refusing to lie down
Unwilling to accept that Enough has left the room
Disheartened grasps of what is, for what could have been
What should have been...........
Whittling away at our place of importance
Residing in the house of peril, as its guarded guests
Defeat extends the neverending hand of ego
Dusting ourselves off, reluctantly we accept
For that which no longer serves us, entombs us
— jamadarie, May 12, 2010
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xena465
16 years ago
Super write Jamadarie
jamadarie
16 years ago
Thank you Rosina for making
jamadarie
16 years ago
Thank you Darknlovely, this