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Oct 11, 2009
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A Hunger
Oodles of doodles and uncooked noodles strewn across the room
Stages of pages and acted out rages dropping their gratuitous boom
Preaching not teaching and reaching for values that seem empty now
Pretending to be sending an ever happy ending in the way I know how
Popping then dropping, but never stopping the chaos that lives in my head
Dreading the threading while carefully treading a hunger that won't be fed
Stages of pages and acted out rages dropping their gratuitous boom
Preaching not teaching and reaching for values that seem empty now
Pretending to be sending an ever happy ending in the way I know how
Popping then dropping, but never stopping the chaos that lives in my head
Dreading the threading while carefully treading a hunger that won't be fed
— jamadarie, Oct 11, 2009
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