xXsierraXx

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Get Me

Posted Jul 16, 2010 · 12 lines · 2 critiques

i just wanted you to get it

i just wanted you to get me

i wanted you to understand

but things didn't go

according to plan

all you did was pretend

until you thought the problem

found its end

now i see

I've had my fill

you don't get me

and you never will

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July 2010
17 Sat

Received a critique
on Get Me from @jetz
"Hi Sierra, I dare say, we have all felt this a time or two. Very nicely done. I'm not a fan of using the lower case "I" but, if you choose to do so, I think it should be consistent. Line 10..'I've'..just my opinion. I a…"
16 Fri

Received a critique
on Get Me from @TimeIsNotAPromise
"i love it! absolutly love it! its my new favorite poem so beautiful great great job! :) Desu Haley"
16 Fri

Posted a poem
Get Me
"i just wanted you to get it"
Open thread 12 lines
June 2010
27 Sun

Received a critique
on Is It Wrong from @Beauregard
"will go a long way with this piece. Line two: "...happy [if] they died?" I can offer you so more suggestions, if you'd like. You're not evil. Anger, hatred, vengeance, these are feelings everyone feels, it's those that…"
26 Sat

Received a critique
on Undefeated from @Candlewitch
"Nice to meet you. I enjoyed this self-reflective piece. Always, Cat"
22 Tue

Critiqued
"Osama Obama" by @Lonnie
"well i started reading the comments but there was too too much so i skipped to the end...i have no idea what the convo. was about i just wanted to put my input on the poem.i don't think it should matter what religion or…"
19 Sat

Critiqued
"Bunger Gun" by @weirdelf
"a bullet knows no names...... that's it wait no it's not is your ear OK? now that's it"
19 Sat

Posted a poem
Is It Wrong
"Is it wrong to hate someone so much that you wish they would die?"
Open thread 15 lines
15 Tue

Highest posting month
June 2010 — 8 poems
13 Sun

Received a critique
on Suicide Note from @ifoundaplace
"It's okay to cry. It really really is. Crying helps release the pressure and it's healthy to cry. No shame in it . So if you must, you may cry. I know I cry a lot and that's a part of who I am now. I cry at the drop of…"
13 Sun

Received a critique
on Suicide Note from @ifoundaplace
"I know exactly how you feel hon and I am sorry that you have gone through those thoughts. i know I have, more than once and we have talked about this before. And ya know, life really is worth living. No matter wht life…"
12 Sat

Posted a poem
Undefeated
"i don’t know what to say"
Open thread 13 lines
09 Wed

Received a critique
on Peaceful Tranquility from @xena465
"I know that feeling Sierra, when you look up to the stars and wonder. You feel a little lost but, in awe of what it all really means? I love it. Xena"
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Peaceful Tranquility from @magics02
"I liked this little write of yours, and you are someone out there always know that for sure. And you can also go out and have fun even while you peacefully admire the clouds. Mona xoxox I like your title Theme was very…"
08 Tue

Posted a poem
Peaceful Tranquility
"As I sit and look up at the sky"
Open thread 13 lines
06 Sun

Posted a poem
Suicide Note
"Why is the world this way?"
Open thread 30 lines
06 Sun

Critiqued
"Fly Away" by @ifoundaplace
"i like this poem i can honestly say i feel like that every other day even though i try to hide it(sometimes)i think i just give off a vibe that I'm not in a good mood.I've always wished i could fly or run away i guess t…"
06 Sun

Critiqued
"THE TERRIFYING NIGHT" by @Jonesk21b
"i like it i think its funny as well as informative("
06 Sun

Critiqued
"Animated Pages" by @Seren
"i like the way it tells a story about some one who has seemingly lost themselves but in truth they're still the same person they were and just need something to help them realize it.those are my favorite types of poems…"
05 Sat

Critiqued
"Love or Lust" by @Sinthya
"i think its beautiful how it shows how some people are only in it for the sex while others want more and want to b committed to people"
05 Sat

Posted a poem
i dont have a title yet but read my story any way
"      I'm sitting in the mall's food court because i have nothing to do.I'm sitting alone because all my friends(all meaning all two)did have something to do.So I'm sitting here eating the last of my french fries doing absolutely nothing.I get up to dump the fries when *BANG* I'm the floor.The first thing I think is why is it that I'm so unlucky that it had to be me that bumped into someone?Next thing I know there's this tan hand offering to help me up.The hand is attached to a muscular arm(not that body builder muscular but that sexii muscular)which was attached to a totally gorgeous body.He helps me up and I brush myself off."Are you o.k."he asks but I'm not even paying attention instead I'm watching the way his lips move.Wow he's hot."Wow you're hot"as soon as the words left my mouth I regretted it.Why am I such an idiot?"Ummm,thanks....you o.k. you fell pretty hard"he asked with gentle eyes that had a hint of concern."Umm,yea,yea,I'm perfectly fine"I say.I can feel his eyes as he looks me over."Well I'm glad you're o.k., uhh...what's your name?"At first i just stare at him as if i didn't know the answer to his question but then i finally managed"Samantha,but everyone calls me Sam,so Sam"I stuttered, it's official I'm an idiot."Well I'm glad you're o.k. Sam, but I gotta go."He turns to leave but then turns back and says"by the way my names Jayden"with a wink and a smile."
Open thread 4 lines
05 Sat

Posted a poem
Experience
"The sights"
Open thread 15 lines
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Cravings
"I want you"
Open thread 39 lines
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Tears
"It's the first time"
Open thread 17 lines
May 2010
31 Mon

Critiqued
"nagasaki mon amour" by @oskar
"im wondering ....... what does the title mean?"
31 Mon

Critiqued
"Hurt,Pain,and Pride." by @hardcore
"it was......AWESOME!!!!! i really liked it it had a lot of meaning and put the spotlight on everyday people who know they're doing wrong, they should read this and hopefully find a new meaning to life than what they wer…"
31 Mon

First critique offered
on "Moon-struck" by @raj
31 Mon

First publication
Darkness Revealed (sun and moon)
31 Mon

Posted a poem
Darkness Revealed (sun and moon)
"Sun and moon you give me light, you illuminate the darkness"
Open thread 11 lines
30 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

15 years of membership

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One year of membership

on Get Me from @jetz

on Get Me from @TimeIsNotAPromise

on Is It Wrong from @Beauregard

on Undefeated from @Candlewitch

"Osama Obama" by @Lonnie

"Bunger Gun" by @weirdelf

June 2010 — 8 poems

on Suicide Note from @ifoundaplace

on Suicide Note from @ifoundaplace

on Peaceful Tranquility from @xena465

on Peaceful Tranquility from @magics02

"Fly Away" by @ifoundaplace

"THE TERRIFYING NIGHT" by @Jonesk21b

"Animated Pages" by @Seren

"Love or Lust" by @Sinthya

"nagasaki mon amour" by @oskar

"Hurt,Pain,and Pride." by @hardcore

on "Moon-struck" by @raj

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