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Jun 04, 2010
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Tears
It's the first time
In a long time
The day i cried.....
I held myself together
Until I crashed
And when it hit , it hit hard
It started out as a single drop
Racing down my face
Trying to find it's way to the bottom
But it took a violent turn
What was first a light drizzle
Turned out like heavy snow fall in a blizzard
No warning
No nothing
It just came
An unstoppable force of nature
In which my feelings were in control
In a long time
The day i cried.....
I held myself together
Until I crashed
And when it hit , it hit hard
It started out as a single drop
Racing down my face
Trying to find it's way to the bottom
But it took a violent turn
What was first a light drizzle
Turned out like heavy snow fall in a blizzard
No warning
No nothing
It just came
An unstoppable force of nature
In which my feelings were in control
— xXsierraXx, Jun 04, 2010
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xena465
16 years ago
Dear Sierra