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Tears

It's the first time
In a long time
The day i cried.....
I held myself together
Until I crashed
And when it hit , it hit hard
It started out as a single drop
Racing down my face
Trying to find it's way to the bottom
But it took a violent turn
What was first a light drizzle
Turned out like heavy snow fall in a blizzard
No warning
No nothing
It just came
An unstoppable force of nature
In which my feelings were in control




— xXsierraXx, Jun 04, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Dear Sierra

Gosh have I had many a day like that! But it is good to cry sometimes, it helps to release all those pent up emotions that caused it in the first place...Nice one. Your a big girl now eh...14! Sigh! The things I got up to at that age!!! Xena