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i dont have a title yet but read my story any way

      I'm sitting in the mall's food court because i have nothing to do.I'm sitting alone because all my friends(all meaning all two)did have something to do.So I'm sitting here eating the last of my french fries doing absolutely nothing.I get up to dump the fries when *BANG* I'm the floor.The first thing I think is why is it that I'm so unlucky that it had to be me that bumped into someone?Next thing I know there's this tan hand offering to help me up.The hand is attached to a muscular arm(not that body builder muscular but that sexii muscular)which was attached to a totally gorgeous body.He helps me up and I brush myself off."Are you o.k."he asks but I'm not even paying attention instead I'm watching the way his lips move.Wow he's hot."Wow you're hot"as soon as the words left my mouth I regretted it.Why am I such an idiot?"Ummm,thanks....you o.k. you fell pretty hard"he asked with gentle eyes that had a hint of concern."Umm,yea,yea,I'm perfectly fine"I say.I can feel his eyes as he looks me over."Well I'm glad you're o.k., uhh...what's your name?"At first i just stare at him as if i didn't know the answer to his question but then i finally managed"Samantha,but everyone calls me Sam,so Sam"I stuttered, it's official I'm an idiot."Well I'm glad you're o.k. Sam, but I gotta go."He turns to leave but then turns back and says"by the way my names Jayden"with a wink and a smile.
         
".....am, Sam"I hear a male voice calling my name.'Huh...." I look around for the person who snapped me out of my wonderful daydream of the first time I met Jayden.I found the culprit!!or should I say culprits,my two best friends."Schools over idiot, come on get up"Luke says. Luke's tall with semi-long dark brown hair,he's mysterious and sometimes kinda cruel, but that's only when someone pisses him off or tries to mess with me or Cammie"Come on,I can't be late or my mom's gonna kill me"Cammie says in a desperate tone.Cammie's my other best friend but she only lets me and Luke call her that(even though Luke doesn't use it unless he wants something)to everyone else it's Cameron.Cammie's the opposite of me,where I have thick auburn hair she has pretty,flowy blond hair,she has a perfect completion,I have freckles,she gets her nails done every Wednesday after school,mine are chewed up disasters,you getting the picture?

   I look back and forth between the two of them still in daydream mode.I yawn stretch and say"hi,how's it going?"."What do you mean "how's it going",get your ass up so we can go home!"Luke says obviously irritated.I laughed at how I and I alone can get him so worked up and push all his buttons with out getting the crap beat out of me,not even Cammie cam get away with some of the crap I pull with him."Alright,alright"I say with both hands up in surrender."I don't want any trouble i just wanna go home"I could barely stop from laughing,well that's idiot humor for ya."You're such an ass"he says with a smile reserved for me.He puts his arm around my shoulder and I give him a hug.Then I run over to Cammie who's just watching.I stop dead in my tracks"what?"I ask referring to the sly grin on her face."Oh nothing"she says with that same smirk.I didn't even have a chance to protest because she started pulling me over to where Luke was waiting at the door."Took you long enough"he said when we got there."You'll get over it,you don't have a choice"I said."Trust me I know,I lost all right to free will when I met you in second grade"he said with a little smile."You got that right,and don't ever forget it"I said with a small smile of my own and a wink."Yea,yea I know" he said with his head held down,I had won this round.But as we walked out the school he lifted his head ever so slightly with a wink and a sly smile that blew Cammie's out the water,and I knew it wasn't over.
— xXsierraXx, Jun 05, 2010

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

2 now. Yes, its really expressive and some good cameo

characterisations. But you really need to edit it for spelling. It's hard to read as it is. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]