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Experience

The sights
The wonder
The experience
The fun
Everything imaginable under the sun
The beauty and history come together as one
The things to experience are nowhere near done
We are way to the grandest of journeys
It goes blah blah blah and stuff about learning
See the flags from everywhere
They sway in the wind as we stand and stare
The skies we wish were baby blue
Stop raining as if on cue
Dreams come true if you really want them to
Maybe on day this will be you
— xXsierraXx, Jun 05, 2010

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Lonnie

16 years ago

Shows promise!

Nice theme, and good visualization, but needs a bit of something more to really punch it up! Good effort!