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May 26, 2010
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It was here in lines
much like these
that I found
a girl I used to be
a journey in words
that has been
extraordinary
I started out
a perfectly good
shell of a woman
I was
a blank sheet
that floated
the breeze
along the way
finding the spirit
to breath life
until the cypher
was revealed,
to be writing
the story
of a life
mine
no longer a parody
no further away
from who I was
could I be
I sometimes get lost,
but the girl
reawakens
to remind me
who I am
— Seren, May 26, 2010
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mona
16 years ago
I loved your poem ,it
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16 years ago
Dearest Mona
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16 years ago
..your life as if tattooed onto your skin
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